I like playing basketball most, but also computer programming, which I think is really cool( even though i don't understand a bit). The day before yesterday, I just got a chance that I'd been looking forward to, to play basketball for almost 2 hours.By the way, I am quite a friendly shy person, who actually wants to talk to others. As you know, preparing with people from other countries, Chinese people appear extremely shy, but don't mind, please.

You have made a great start with this first post. I would like you to edit with these points in mind:
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Do not start a sentence with "And".
Add more details about basketball or why you love computer programming.
Good job, and thank you!
How old are you, shy boy? haha~
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